This is a great example of good flash fiction. You took a moment of extreme conflict for the characters and with sparse words painting an illuminating portrait. Very nice job. I loved the last line!
Grew up with the laughter of Jim Henson echoing down the hall and the likes of Stan Lee darkening my door. Fiction is in my bones. Awkward humor is my maladie.
Grew up with the laughter of Jim Henson echoing down the hall and the likes of Stan Lee darkening my door. Fiction is in my bones. Awkward humor is my maladie.
